Score: 9

"Perfect flash but..."

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.8

date: November 4, 2009

You just had to leave us at a cliffhanger, didn't you? Oh well. Considering I'm a big fan of your series, i can wait for the next one. The fight scenes were great but I've been wondering about something. If they can fly in the air during battles, how come they can't when they're not fighting? On the plus side, their wasn't as much dialogue in this one than in episode 7, and the jokes were cool. Keep up the good work Alvin.

Score: 10

"WOW"

submission: Sonic:Nazo Unleashed Pt 3

date: May 31, 2009

That was one of the most awesome flashes ever created on Newgrounds that I've seen. I take that back. This is one of the most awesome flashes ever. I couldn't find a single thing wrong with this flash, so i have nothing to critique you on. All I can say is "Excellent flash".

Score: 10

"amazing"

submission: The Real Legend 3

date: May 1, 2009

i don't know how you can improve on this series, and personally i like the graphics this way, because it kind of suits the setting. And the length should be the same, don't make them shorter, but keep them coming. I gotta pity Link though; he sure does take a beating in these episodes. At least he has Navi with him o keep him company, and a donkey to ride on.

Score: 1

"didn't like it"

submission: Level Game

date: May 1, 2009

there was no instructions, no title screen, just a five step game. Way too short, no levels, and not even a restart button. How this game not get blammed, I've got no idea but it should've considering it wasn't your first flash (according to your comments on (One Movie)). You should delete this flash, and upgrade it, by making at least three or more levels, put a title screen in, put in the instructions on how to play the game, make a restart button, and add some music. If you put in everything i said above in this game, you'll get a better score from people.

Score: 5

"well..."

submission: One Movie

date: May 1, 2009

If this had sound, it would've been better. It was very random, and for your first flash, it was OK I guess. I don't know. It wasn't great, but it wasn't bad for your first attempt, so I'll give you a 3/5. Remember, sound is essential in a flash.

Score: 9

"very funny"

submission: Link's Breakin in 3

date: February 22, 2009

You misspelled "replay". It's "replay" not "replai". Make sure you spell check before you put it into coding. It did make me laugh, but you should've made these flashes longer. Aside from that i can't find anything else to improve on.

Score: 10

"great fight"

submission: Yoshi vs Gohan

date: February 22, 2009

when i first saw that gohan was going to be fighting Yoshi, I thought Yoshi was going to get owned. However, once the flash was over, I thought to myself "Now that's one bad-ass Yoshi." I can't wait for the next one. 5/5 10/10.

Score: 7

"Improvements needed"

submission: LOZ: The Light Rupee Pt01

date: February 16, 2009

Usually i don't like a lot of swearing in flashes unless it's put in a humorous way, which you did. Don't worry about the length so much as long as it's good because I've seen short flashes before that I like. Still, you should make it a bit longer. You need to make the font bigger, but not too big. I could read it, but it would make it easier to read for other people.
I know you said there is no audio, but for future ones, you should put some in. As for the voice acting, again, you don't need it. Their was no talking in the LOZ: Ocarina of Time, or Majora's Mask (I haven't played the other ones above the N64) unless I'm mistaken, so no voice actors. I also like how Navi and Link don't get along and start swearing at each other, but they still stick together (unless Link is too busy running away from her LOL).
It needs credits at the end, or you could make a main menu, and have it as an option. A scene selection option would be another great addition to the main menu, so people can get to their favorite parts.
Now i haven't made a flash yet, but take this review into consideration. Keep up the good work.

Score: 8

"I just have three letters for this movie..."

submission: SG- Friday the 13th

date: February 13, 2009

...WTF? When i first saw that my eyes widened, and I kept saying the words What the F**k over and over again. A jukebox with Jason's hockey mask tied to it, playing the song "Don't worry, be happy" is quite the parody. Good job, but please, find a better singer. Next time, you should make a "Nightmare on Elm ST". parody.

Score: 4

"I've seen better..."

submission: Castle Rescue 2

date: February 12, 2009

but I've also seen worse. For those who need help, you need to aim ABOVE the target because the arrow arcs DOWNWARDS. Like the other comments said, it gets boring easily, but in the beginning it's fun. At least their are power-ups to help you get farther up in the levels.